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Friction |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050
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For some, love has boundaries and limits that can only go so far. Say a, continent perhaps. Step one inch over that line though sorry, you’re out of bounds, I mean, love can only reach so far, right? Funny, I always thought love was unlimited and all inclusive, omnipresent and universal. Friction. It is everywhere isn’t it? In fact, it is on the very land you sit upon right now reading this. Well, if you won’t come to my mountain then I’ll just have to bring the mountains to you. If you need to be on the same land mass as I then so be it, I’ll be there. It may take awhile though but hang on I’m on my way. There will come the day when my continent slams back into yours again both of them grinding against each other creating a bulging mountain range high into the atmosphere its base in the wetness of your tides where your sea floor spreads its oceanic trench for me sweet and briny pulling my tectonic plate with such gravity and suction deep, deep, deep, into your core, as my volcano erupts and your earth quakes both of us spewing forth together red hot liquid land, of molten love. Until then blow softly against the wind, somehow your breath will reach me gentle. As your whispers rub against my bloom and release the seeds of my dandelion to fly, to the garden of you. Friction is wonder, with land and with sky. The traction of words once started desire that laid on your loins and turned into fire. Our full moon has risen, each night has less glow. Sometimes even smiles in loneness, must go. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
other than not being too fond of dandelion seeds, you are on a roll~~~ M |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
You are so talented.. always a fresh take, a new metaphor.. never, ever stale, Richy! Nicely done ~Amaryllis |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow! A fine trip along with you here. Love it! |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
"Funny, I always thought love was unlimited and all inclusive, omnipresent and universal." Funny, I always thought so too. Enjoyed! Helen |
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Lamar Cole Member
since 2009-05-01
Posts 274 |
Great poem of sensuality and romance. |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Thanks so much everyone! You guys are the wonderfulest!  |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"Friction is wonder, with land and with sky" extremely sensual... |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Oh dear Lady thank you dearheart you are the sweetest thing ever! Richard xx |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Friction is very sensual! Enjoyed! Kat >^..^< |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Kat is it just me or is it getting hot around here? Thank you sweetheart you are soo cute! Richard xx |
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