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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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I would always pray for voyeurs to witness and doves to whisper of your secrets and most of all windows with wide eyes that would know how you wore obligation you would watch my hands with your eyes closed and would say that the silk made sigh songs when it confined your privileges immovable and sound was all you could offer freedom to time would be our sand by the handfuls slowly perhaps we would name the grains individually with proper sounding momentary salutations followed by silence to celebrate their duration before another burl was beguiled to seduction __________________ daark (white rope series) |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
this is some series...of ropes... the entire poem, a sleek seduction...this image here: "time would be our sand by the handfuls slowly" ~~~~~~~niiice write-on~*~* |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
bb-bel1e..thanks little one |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
indeed a seductive series... your way with words and phrase to paint the imagery as well as the heat beneath is to be admired sir.... and I do... a pleasure as always m'friend |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Cpat...humble thanks amigo |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
 Here is your shy mourning dove doing unexplicable things, like sitting on a feeder, instead of joining her flock bird claws scratching the earth. She found a better venue for breakfast, one with a view into your world.  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sun...she is lovely as she visits temptation from the edge of her safe perch..thanks lady |
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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
*chuckles @ the stalker subtext and 1970s Hollywood references* An interesting write. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ez1..more to do with the art of shibari or japanese bondage art and a jujun friend of mine. Thanks for the read |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
Your suductions are truly a thing of beauty to behold. EBM |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ebm, thank you ms |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: I find resonance within your words while admiring your exquisite creativity. Love, Margherita  |
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