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Fallen Apart |
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rosepetals36 Member
since 2010-07-09
Posts 137Pa 
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I sit here painfully alone knowing that you are in her bed. All of me has fallen apart. With deep breaths I try to find the peace that hides. I can't remember the last time I had a tearless night A quiet calm night I dont know how to live here in my unreal world. I just want to hide away. Life drags me thorugh another day wearing fake smiles and happy words, like a mask to cover whats real. I didnt think Id be alone. How do I do this alone? -- Used to be rosepetals25 |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
one minute at a time.... sad piece ... that leaves the reader hoping for the one it was written about... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Tara..welcome to PIP...you show your heart openly lovely, as they say, perhaps tomorrow will be the day you are waiting to see |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Very poignant poem, and yes, you go on one minute at a time. I have learned finally the difference between being lonely and alone, as you can be more alone in a relationship than on your own. Well done, and welcome to Passions. Words are weapons, toss them with care. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to PiP, Tara. Please check your email For a Very Special Greeting. " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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rosepetals36 Member
since 2010-07-09
Posts 137Pa |
Thank you all for your replies! I'm not really new here... I used to be rosepetals25 many years ago. Things got slightly confused with that acct when I tried to change my email and here I am with a new name.  -- Used to be rosepetals25 before I lost my password LOL |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
welcome back! As you know, if you're here, you are never alone. |
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rosepetals36 Member
since 2010-07-09
Posts 137Pa |
Ty It's been awhile but I'm hoping my muse sticks around for a bit. |
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