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Always Watching
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Always Watching |
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Tomer Senior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168Michigan |
She watched me as the world does With the hawks at her feet The lovely sight of her Blossom toes Riding along as the sunset does And I said hello. I looked at her like the Night does as we sleep, And we exchanged smiles with her narrow shoulders Broadening for a slight path into her, Into the world of hers Where it’s a bit colder, A bit lonelier, but it’s us, On the stage of each other’s mouths On the lips of our dreams She watched me from afar, From the easy path, the easy cars riding high, Riding towards me, watching me And I said hello. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
enjoyed the exchange between both of you...thanks for the delicate words and feelings have a nice day yann |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
Very well written.. really enjoyed this  ~Amaryllis |
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Tomer Senior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168Michigan |
Thanks, guys. Thanks, Yann...hope all is well Tomer |
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