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Tim
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since 1999-06-08
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0 posted 2010-07-08 10:55 PM


I heard a whisper as the wind,
blew 'cross the Kansas prairie,
I stopped to listen on Rayl's hill,
From my journey I would tarry.

I fear the words I could not glean,
The wind spoke O' so light,
And so my sojourn I did end,
As came the soothe of night.

Soon I left the open field,
To return to hearth and home,
I stopped and faced back to Rayl's hill,
In calm of twilight's gloam.

I heard the whisper of the wind,
as stars commenced to shine,
Caring not what words were spoken,
in thrall of vespertine.
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Cpat Hair
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Member Patricius
since 2001-06-05
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1 posted 2010-07-09 07:44 AM

well done sir... I have walked the Kansas plain and in the hill country... you capture well the essence of something there..

enjoyed!
Lamar Cole
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since 2009-05-01
Posts 274
2 posted 2010-07-09 12:10 PM

Very nice.
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