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zeusthamghty Junior Member
since 2010-06-20
Posts 45west virginia, usa |
In this cold and lonely place, I stand-alone and am forgotten. There is so much to do But I have died in my own right. No one knows me for who I am And no one really cares. People used to notice, Everything that I did. Now it’s like, I don’t even exist. I used to think That I was good looking, Now no one even looks, Or talks to me. The people that I cared for the most Have all just vanished into thin air. I have no one or anything any more. Its like I’ve lost part of my soul, But in fact I’ve lost my mind and my heart. And there is nothing that can fill that void. |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
I really do not know what to say but I do wish you the best and hope that you find happiness. |
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zeusthamghty Junior Member
since 2010-06-20
Posts 45west virginia, usa |
this one was once again written while i was in the navy |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
It's times like this, out in the middle of nowhere, away from our fam and freinds, that we really come to terms of many things, like survival, and will, and honor. We are never really alone, unless we close our heart and choose to be. Really enjoyed this poet. Happy Fourth of July! Richard  |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
I take it that you are no longer in the navy Well I hope things are a lot better now and that you can see the light at the end of the tunnel. Good luck my friend. Lindsay |
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Eldest Member
since 2010-06-15
Posts 177Alabama |
Do you now have someone around you? As long as you are on this list, these lovely people will care about you. |
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Superwoman New Member
since 2010-07-08
Posts 9 |
Better days are coming. |
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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
It's tough being screwed over by the Confederacy of Dunces. Yes, it is. I hope things are better now. A thought-provoking work, and I thank you for mentioning it is from the past... If I post any years-ago stuff here (which I haven't yet), I must remember to attribute it as such. Thanks. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
hello zeus, your poem inspired me a verse, friends are our soul...I owe you that and the beautiful reading I did...Thanks for sharing. yann |
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