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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2010-07-08 07:16 AM


I could have told you there were demons in portland
but you would have said the coffee was too good
and the trees were too green for evil to remain

you spoke of the rope monger as if he were god
kissing his fingers on the ends while smiling
telling him about how knots made you ache inside

and sometimes a woman just needs to feel helpless
like she has no say in what will happen next
something about the anticipation is seductive

and the waiting patiently for something eventual
makes one feel more alive then comfortable does
and you didn't know why you got the tattoo really

but you remembered I encountered some of my own there


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Sunshine
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1 posted 2010-07-08 08:12 AM


Nodding...so many styles of indigo.
So many noughts to abide by, for.

A gift...
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bel1e
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2 posted 2010-07-08 08:23 AM


~my oh my~

siiigh-worthy stuff~

         

Cpat Hair
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3 posted 2010-07-08 08:52 AM


well done as always Sir...
I think you simply get better each time I read your words.

Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2010-07-08 09:53 AM


ms sun..you do soddie so sexy..thanks lady

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bb-bel1e, thanks for the sigh..my favorite sound

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Cpat, thanks amigo..I just herd the words around, they make the images all by themselves.

Margherita
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5 posted 2010-08-20 11:52 AM


quote:
and the waiting patiently for something eventual
makes one feel more alive then comfortable does



How true! (though I don't qualify for a patient being ... )

What a treasure I have found. Spellbinding.

Love,
Margherita

BluesSerenade
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6 posted 2010-08-20 07:23 PM


mmmm hmmm, so many shades of blue, so little time.  *smooch*

Always love your flair and innuendos, DS~

Dark Stranger
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7 posted 2010-08-21 06:54 AM


ms mar, thanks little lady


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babyblue, thanks babe...I think you would like this art form.

Amaryllis
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8 posted 2010-08-21 09:57 PM


Would this be the City of Roses?  Wow, Dark.. intruiging title, fascinating content.  
~Amaryllis

passing shadows
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9 posted 2010-08-22 02:17 AM


hmmm, I believe I might have to agree here
Dark Stranger
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10 posted 2010-08-22 06:45 AM


Amary...actually has to do with nawashibari (japanese rope art) and a jujun who travels the west coast sometimes.  Thanks ms

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ms dixie...thanks lady friend

Eusta B. Mae
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11 posted 2010-08-23 01:38 PM


...and sometimes a woman just needs to feel helpless
like she has no say in what will happen next
something about the anticipation is seductive........That's what it is like just to read your work D.  I add my sighs to all the others. ebm

Dark Stranger
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12 posted 2010-08-23 02:58 PM


ms ebm, thanks for the read ms..welcome back
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