Open Poetry #46 |
Two |
serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Number two is...difficult. My specs are always ludicrous if not they are preposterous, aphasiatics (watch for stars) whimpering osmotic pain: those blues that twinkle light my brain like I am Star Wars--again. I-am-your-father I am pain. I'm the darrrr... j'jah--jeeling simper simmering your tea stuh-stuh-stuh-stuh stuttering straining limmed leafs in your bed. I'll tell your fortune sans the blame-- watch the patterning and guess my sincerity. * * * Exercize Two from Bobk |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
love that the images here are infused with pop culture~
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
like this on several levels... one can read into it as they wish it would seem sans the blame, of course |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I'll tell your fortune sans the blame- I love it, Ida |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thanks. Some days I miss Farmville, though, I do confess... *smile* It gave me the delusion of being productive. My poetry, if we would call it that, seems to enhance the self-loathing stuff. I was going to do all twenty of Bobk's writing prompts, but I think I'll spare you guys. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
beautiful words, i enjoyed the beauty of the write. regards yann |
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