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Open Poetry #46

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SarBear
Member

since 2003-06-05

Posts 205
Massachusetts

0 posted 2010-01-19 08:29 PM

My eyes reflect what my mind cannot comprehend,
My heart is already trying to mend.
Rising above but the weight in my heart is bringing me down.
dreams of running away have been given up.

Ten thousand feet,
Climbing.
As I watched the snow fade,
I blinked and it rained.

Looking down, now, I see only clouds,
They’re calling my name.
Maybe they are here to float me back to your arms,
where I belong.

My memories are holding me together,
My bindings will break if they fade.
You have disappeared into my past,
As I pray that this distance won’t last.

The future is where we belong,
So we need to stay strong.
Until the day my lips press against yours,
And we find that what’s mean to be doesn’t have to be fantasy.

Glistening Tears Roll Down My Cheeks
Turn Into *Diamonds* and fall at your feet

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

1 posted 2010-01-19 08:40 PM

Yo dear SarBear,

This is pretty good. Try "meant" instead of "mean" in the last line.

Love Bobby

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2010-01-25 04:50 PM

Enjoyed...James

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