Open Poetry #46 |
Forrest and Jenny |
katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Forrest and Jenny Oh Forrest, Your Jenny is near Come here, come here, There's nothing to fear Your love for me is clear. Oh Forrest, It's just you and me I'll let you see My skin is soft as can be What? You have to pee! Oh Forrest, Don't be shy Say that you want to try No, it won't hurt, I won't cry It's what people do, no lie! Oh Forrest, Breathe, you're turning blue! It's ok, it's ok, it's true Just between me and you Your Jenny loves you too! |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
A feeling of love and the first experience that results from it is wonderfully captured in this piece. |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
very well composed ! lyrical and emotive~~~ ~~enjoyed
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
And then there was baby Gump. Welcome to Passions! Please check your email for a Very Special Greeting! " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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zeusthamghty Junior Member
since 2010-06-20
Posts 45west virginia, usa |
i enjoyed that. very nice |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Thank you everyone who read my poem. It's inspired by the movie but also because my boyfriend calls me "His Jenny". Kat >^..^< |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
delightful! |
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