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Open Poetry #46
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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2010-06-29 08:04 AM

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A stupid ride—
Cruising without feeling
The tunnel of love


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1 posted 2010-06-29 08:15 AM

a rather bleak portrait..but captured well
easy1
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since 2010-05-22
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2 posted 2010-07-04 07:34 PM

This does capture and relate the feelings as to why such rides are not always the best choice.
serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
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3 posted 2010-07-04 07:37 PM

Well.

It is a small world, afterall.



Good, John.
jwesley
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since 2000-04-30
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Spring, Texas
4 posted 2010-07-05 09:12 AM

Ha! Was not so stupid for me . . . but then, I wouldn't have road it "without" feeling.

j.
2islander2
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by the sea
5 posted 2010-07-05 11:38 AM

enjoyed it.

yann
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