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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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she had shadow candy in her pockets would reach for some sometimes when strage folks were looking at her and would unwrap it slowly then taste made them all want some of her secret they said she had spirts in her mouth other people talking when she spoke said the trees would listen and rustle like she had wind demons in her words and leaves were her hucksters of rumor I knew her eyes some dawns before early when my wine was gone and I was staggered dodging the tripwires in alley valleys and worshiping embers of something rolled that made the pain grow more easy to find she would watch me from a doorway and nod as if she knew how we would fit together when our bones went dancing with the devil and our skins were left behind on chair arms with rocking wicker holding them empty to dry as I ran by her, I knew my steps were slowing ___________ daark (scribblenote..hoodie lady under the victoria bridge) |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
The ability to observe...and to really see is rare sir... it's obvious to me you have that ability and the ability to weave your own back story to what you see... welll done..as always |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
this is more than a little bit haunting, Dark One~~~ love your ghosts~  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Capt..thanks amigo _____________ darkdot...I think she is homeless but maybe just knows when I will be riding under the bridge..thanks little one |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Love that last line, something about slow steps and sunlit shadows. Always somethin' special from you, DS~ |
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
as if she knew how we would fit together when our bones went dancing with the devil and our skins were left behind on chair arms with rocking wicker holding them empty to dry This falls into my "wish I had written that" notebook....magnificent imagery there. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
babyblue...thanks for the eyes _______________ balladeer, thanks sir for the read |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
INTENSE could put myself there .... "they said she had spirts in her mouth other people talking when she spoke said the trees would listen and rustle like she had wind demons in her words and leaves were her hucksters of rumor"
~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks ms king...I appreciate your eyes my friend |
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