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Mind Control |
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anya Member
since 2002-07-27
Posts 393London, UK |
Mind Control Marshalling my thoughts, No room for dissenters. My mind needs to keep in step Not skip onto the next daydream A rigid formation of rank and file Is my steely defence. Feelings that desert at break of day Will be up against the wall |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
enjoyed it, thoughtful ans surprising. regards yann |
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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
When many people gone very wrong oppose you, good faith - as best you can - is necessary. |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
A very good poem that deserves a large audience. I hope it catches on. |
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Kethry D Member
since 2010-04-12
Posts 64Australia |
Very military and stirring! A poet must leave traces of his passing not proof. |
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