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| Open Poetry #46 |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. Ah after all is said And done— fireflies searching For one night stands . |
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Bastet Member
since 2010-05-07
Posts 246 |
"A man who has no imagination has no wings" Muhammad Ali. However, fireflies do have wings and so does your poetry. |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
excellent |
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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
And brief is a firefly's life, too. At least they are not day trippers. Another appreciated short. Keep them coming, please. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
exquisite. yann |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo John, We all try to appear to be the brightest, and best. Bobby |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
Clever. |
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anya Member
since 2002-07-27
Posts 393London, UK |
Made me smile, succinct with a real sense of wit. |
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Kethry D Member
since 2010-04-12
Posts 64Australia |
and aren't we all... fireflies I mean. A poet must leave traces of his passing not proof. |
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