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Chasing Smoke
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Chasing Smoke |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
is it insane i ask that we spend a sunlit saturday in march chasing smoke while others go about their day unaware there is even a fire hold my hand hang on for the ride as the lion roars across november's embers igniting a spark that suffered through the thin air of winter but burns anew in the heady winds of spring |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
awesome!!! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Very well done... truly enjoyed |
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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
This is pretty good work, and from a curmudgeon type that's praise.  It's been said the winter part of March "comes in like a lion", but that ferocity can sometimes linger. I know a thing or two about unraked leaves, too. An enjoyable and invigorating read! |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
The poem glides along fine. Winter in March is no fun! |
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