Open Poetry #46 |
Thinking of Dad |
jlocke Member
since 2000-09-10
Posts 169CC,TX |
Thinking of Dad I know that when I was young You were away at work more than not But of all the memories of my youth There are no gaps. You’re there the lot I remember the times you'd read to us While lying on the hallway floor From your beloved sci-fi novels Full of fantastical future lore There were times I'd sneak downstairs When you were sure I was asleep Just to jump out and say BOO! And watch you scream and leap I remember how you would ensure the rake Would fit my hands just so Then say it must have been made for me And off to work I'd reluctantly go In everything you did and said In all things great and less than grand You gave me the tools I'd need To someday become a man I remember from youth up till this very day All the fun, the wisdom and love you share Of all the dads I'll ever meet Not a one will ever be able to compare. -Jeremy L. Culberth |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
I like this loving tribute to an obviously respected father.. great write ~Amaryllis |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Thank you for sharing this, it is endearing and so full of love. Really nice writing~ |
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VelvetVampress Junior Member
since 2010-04-24
Posts 26 |
I love it... beautiful and full of love. Thank you for your share. ~Velvet Vampress~ |
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Bastet Member
since 2010-05-07
Posts 246 |
A wonderful portrayal of childhood memories, full of positive emotion and picture-perfect. Really heart-warming! |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Thank you. I love you. Dad |
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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
Ah, the fantastical stories, and the rake that fits just so... Thanks for the memories and for posting this very worthy writing here. |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
A great tribute to a wonderful dad. |
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