Open Poetry #46 |
The Frog Prince |
bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
My Most Charming Prince, by the time I was done writing, you had disappeared inside me, an absence bound by the wet dreamscape of your skin, the body, but a token of the thought that made it, yet, I counted years by those bruised moments of light, let me, bring you the night, for somewhere in its pitch, is a song tingling in the cold, your absence, a distant set of coordinates marked on a brittle map, X recedes solemnly ahead, our tremulous compass skittered in haywire abandon, sadly, the current is so strong only the drowned can decipher it, sadly, there is no simple way to say this, it turns itself into longing, screws itself into a plea, you've no idea how my bare ankles ache upon their icy perch, all useless and porcelain in their manacles, sadly, the slipper wasn't but fur, but a mistake, lost in its translation, voir [ermine, fur] for verre [glass], love is nothing but illusion, for too long I've cradled this tooth ache, hold me down, and I'll let you, bid me violence and storm, and by the time I was done writhing, you had disappeared inside me, an absence dissolves upon the wet dreamscape of skinned knees, buckling beneath the current, the body but a token of the thought that made it rise from night, sadly, there's a song lost somewhere in its pitch, sadly, the current is so strong, only the drowned may decipher it. ~Yours Forever After, X
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Tremendously touching and written with true mastery. Love, Margherita |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
Thanxxx so much, M~ good to see you again ~ |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Lovely my dear...as always... |
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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
A good read... I think my favorite lines are the song tingling in the night reference. The longing here is palpable and very well expressed. |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
~Thanks Chief~ XOXOXOXOX
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
Thanks so much Easy1 !!!!!!!
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
babybell with her love socks pulled up to knee highs...goes so well with your eyes babe..enjoyed your blood here |
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