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Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2010-06-18 07:36 AM

Daylilies dancing
In a cool dew laden breeze,
Glass and grasses drink.

Footprints to follow
From mud puddle to puddle
Left by thunderstorms.

Tires cry, horns blow,
Noise replaces the quiet
Another day starts.

Gloom

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2010-06-18 08:15 AM

I have been trying to load my picture of daylilies for the last hour~~ coincidentally

M

easy1
Senior Member

since 2010-05-22

Posts 1209
Southeastern USA

2 posted 2010-06-18 09:22 AM

...and, coincidentally, I have been getting drunk before noon.

All good, these. Very well-painted moving pictures, complete with sound and even a hint of some aromas.

Amaryllis
Senior Member

since 2010-05-20

Posts 1306
Mi now

3 posted 2010-06-18 11:33 AM

Wonderful sensate slice of life! Enjoyed

~Amaryllis

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

4 posted 2010-06-19 05:03 AM

wonderful, delicious.

regards

yann

Bastet
Member

since 2010-05-07

Posts 246

5 posted 2010-06-21 01:03 AM

Haiku is one of my favorite types of poetry and I enjoyed yours very much indeed. I am always happy to see people inventing original subjects and imagery for this very concise and traditional form. Bravo.

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

6 posted 2010-06-21 05:40 AM

Thank you all
for taking the time to read and respond.

Haiku is one of my favorite forms.

Gloom

rosepetals36
Member

since 2010-07-09

Posts 137
Pa

7 posted 2010-09-15 11:38 AM

I am also a Haiku lover

I liked.

-- Used to be rosepetals25 :) I never know what to say when I reply to a poem, so ignore the lameness!

ken206573
Member

since 2008-10-14

Posts 487

8 posted 2010-09-15 06:59 PM

Your haiku's have made my day, they are sensational.

bel1e
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since 2006-07-24

Posts 1631

9 posted 2010-09-15 08:24 PM

~a the poetic brevity of Haiku being a true penchant of mine~~~~so enjoyed~*~

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

10 posted 2010-09-15 08:43 PM

You are a Haiku master, Professor.
Ida

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