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Summer Villanelle |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Summer Sun adds sweat to my brow As I toil in a day too long and bright, Yet I continue my struggle for now. It just a garden too small to plow In need of weeding to set it right, Summer Sun adds sweat to my brow Thirsty the leaves shrink and bow From little water and too much light, Yet I continue my struggle for now. With my efforts it survives somehow Resting with a cool drink every night, Summer Sun adds sweat to my brow When finished my toil in soil I will allow Myself to rest away from the sunlight Yet I continue my struggle for now. The garden’s survival is a minor vow Flowers to enhance my daily sight, Summer Sun adds sweat to my brow, Yet I continue my struggle for now. Gloom |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
the struggle is worth the results  http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v143/nakdthoughts/5d2d2ec2.jpg not sure if this will work...I am too far behind the technology, it seems or at least my computer is m! |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Thank you for adding beauty to my poem Gloom |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
We who toil and wipe sweat from our brows will smile insistently when the fruits of our labour begin to show. Beautifully done. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
beautiful and high refection about what we are, we have to keep humble and cultivate our gardens (Voltaire), thanks for the strong words... regards yann |
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