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Let Love Lead Us
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Let Love Lead Us |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana 
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You should have listened When I told you to leave You should have left When I begged you please I could have been a different man I could have risen from stricken knees There’s no answer to The wind’s whispered riddle There’s no more room With me caught in the middle Time keeps destroying us Little by little Let love lead us Further down Our own Jesus Let love lead us I should have listened To the night’s cold warning Just as another couple In passion warming Woke to find themselves In the midst of morning Unlike a fairy tale With a hidden meaning And so much desire Still in feeling What choice other than Living or leaving? Let love lead us Further down Our own Jesus Let love lead us Somewhere between love and lust Let love lead us |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Exceptional cadence, this read like a song. Well done. |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
Thank you Kathy, it kind of is, but there is no audio on this site really. Well, not that I can figure out. lol |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
I hear it....great song! ~ARh |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Intriguing poetic ponderings. Live or leave, that's indeed the essence. Love, Margherita |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
There’s no answer to The wind’s whispered riddle ~*~ Life is that, just. There will never be an answer that one can accept, until we are beyond.  Well done! Beyond your norm, continue! |
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