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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now 
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And when you raked through colored bricks like some lego-playing boy selecting this, erecting that rattle scatter letters twist apart from what I built to construct what only you did dream I was not in the room could not care less . *humming Carly Simon |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
Interesting read, as always Amaryllis. Hmmmmm. lol |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
 lol |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Amaryllis, This poem is beyond me. I don't understand it, but then I don't understand a lot of things. Love Bobby |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
i tried in "vain" 39 times to figure this out...well a couple of times anyway..carly was gore's running mate before tipper right? |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
Oh dear, `twas merely a reply to critical comment I received irl.. someone I know who turned my poem around.. nothing more.. but made me feel better to write it lol! No political undercurrent  . Thanks for reading though! ^-^ B Best~Amaryllis . (not you, all my pip friends!) =) |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms amary...was thinking of that song.."you're so vain" that CS did..was kidding about the politial juice.. |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
Dark.. I know.. yah.. that was the song It`s all good ~A |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Interesting in one way but the meaning rather unclear. Take care. Lindsay |
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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
Oh, well, what I meant to say is it's a good write; the slight obscurity makes interpretations as different as psychological to land misuse possible. Such is the sandbox, sometimes. [This message has been edited by easy1 (06-10-2010 11:55 AM).] |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
Thank you, Lindsay and easy1.. yes, I know it`s rather abstract & nebulous.. I typically try to avoid this type of poem, (the kind that only the author can `get`)..because I feel it`s disrespectful to the reader.. I apologize for the opacity. =( Back to my normal (heh) self today  . Thanks for reading! ~Amaryllis |
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