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Open Poetry #46

revelry

Edder
Senior Member

since 2003-04-02

Posts 671

0 posted 2010-01-17 08:13 PM

tin roof tunes
and raindrop dance
drowned in the patter
of pulse pounding
heart-song

soul-strummed
to the ebb
and flow
of poetry
in cadence
with breath
held
in moments
of gasp
knowing that ecstasy
rides a thin line
and hugs the edge
of your curve
where shadow-flesh
yearns
and nerves crumble
in shivers
of revelry

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

1 posted 2010-01-18 02:38 AM

Edder,

I like this so much. It makes me long for the soft sound of rain on my roof and streams of drops sliding down my window.

Alison

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2010-01-18 01:51 PM

I just had my own "shivers of revelry"! Thanks, I needed that!

That's my kinda summer! lol
Good to read you again, Edder!

A delightful read! ~ Truly!

EA

www.lindadowd.com

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

3 posted 2010-01-18 07:31 PM

I've a story about rain and a tin roof, and I'd tell it, but you already did!

It's great to read you again, Ed.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

4 posted 2010-01-19 12:39 PM

Heart-song... mine soared when I saw your name! *S* I was copying my favorite lines, but had the whole poem highlighted, so... *G*

I could say I wouldn't be so giddy if you posted more often... but when a poem's this beautiful, dignity is difficult. *G*

Superb write, my friend... saved into my library. *S*

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