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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Poetry your words stir me the places to fill the void when winter leaves it’s raw icy edges on windows scratching at the glass to feel the hope of warmth the green of me in spring to turn the handle tasting unquenchable liquid language calming childlike fears of darkness of voices reading lyrics aloud to travel places far and unknown in a dialect I understand resting safely in the strength of words tightly holding and carrying me tiny within its inspired voice to dance unafraid on stars and step on the ladder of clouds resting in a shadows shade "I'm so hard to handle |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
Oooohhhh Lady you outdo yourself! This is exquisite.. an instant fave.. you make me log back in so I can comment & save it.. Love love love..the whole thing~!  . (Now I must scurry...HAVE to get some laundry done..!!) Love~Amaryllis |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
What more can one say, then, I love this. Richard xx |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Amazingly I read all three of you and sometimes can only hear one heart beat. How about a trio write, and make it a LONG one? Would be a beautiful story to be told if all three of you wrote it! Your words stir me too, not in Karen's way, but a nice way, LOL  p.s. I am having trouble packing for Orlando - like what on earth does 90 - feels like - 111 mean? Today it is 61 here and I am cookin! Please tell me that is something else besides 50 degrees higher than here, right? |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
I would adore to write with you two.. Although my art is more Wyeth where you two are Degas, Monet, Seraut. I want to learn to write in your impassioned, free style.. sometimes I feel my work is so.. dry, mechanical. |
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Lamar Cole Member
since 2009-05-01
Posts 274 |
Very Nice. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Oh my, I adore your poetry, especially love the turn of the handle and all that it implies. It is always such a treat to read you, slick one. |
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