Open Poetry #46 |
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Faithful Love |
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whisperingwalt Member
since 2010-04-29
Posts 240Coquitlam, BC, Canada |
Faithful Love In the deepest meaning of who I am in Inside my ransomed heart‘s thoughts I love you for who you are A fragile heart who dares to love God’s gift to help me be grateful As we’ve travelled on this journey We’ve walked the beaches on the Mayan Riviera Danced when we didn’t know how Gave when it hurt to give We held each other tenderly To comfort each other, from life’s unfairness When I went and lost my way You kept the light on in the window So I could find my way home Where I knew that I belonged You’re a woman of incredible character That always loves me deeply and still laughs like a silly school girl When my jokes catch your funny You are my eye witness to my life And I am the fortunate man To have wife, a lover and a friend, Who chose to keep the faith ...in Gods loving plan for us |
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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
Very sweet, a lovely and easygoing read. You and she are lucky, or perhaps the word is blessed! Never been to the Mayan Riviera personally, but I have acquaintance of it. |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
Very beautiful |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Walter, this is a most heartfelt, beautiful gift for your wife. There are many touching lines. Love, Margherita |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo ww, There's a lot of good thoughts in this poem. Bobby |
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whisperingwalt Member
since 2010-04-29
Posts 240Coquitlam, BC, Canada |
Thank you for your kind feedback..I gave this poem to her as her Birthday gift all framed and matted this past weekend ....she cried and thanked me for it |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
You are my eye witness to my life And I am the fortunate man To have wife, a lover and a friend, Who chose to keep the faith ...in Gods loving plan for us You are indeed a lucky man Walt and realizing it is a very prudent trait to have much enjoyed. Lindsay |
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