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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. On the road to Sata— Robin and sparrows Taking water from a stream . |
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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
Yes, I see them. |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Thank you This is a difficult poem demanding to be read one and each line at a time. I myself lose its value when passed through with any velocity Thanks again John . |
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