Open Poetry #46 |
Nirvana |
XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia |
The water is much sweeter now Now, that you cannot taste it Much better than when you were submerged and the water had no taste Everything there is better now Now, that you cannot get there Much better than when you were deep within and location had no place The emptiness is much fuller now Now, that you've seen the cornucopia Much better than the half Planck prior to conception of dystopia Life there is much more blissful now Now, that you're pre premortem Much better than when you arose within and evacuated due to boredom I know you're never get there Only here can you pursue it but do Doer, do For without you there's really nothing to it. *** |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You have done a great job here, dear Larry. Thought provoking. Love, Margherita |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
Quite interesting.. I had to re-read it a time or three; still not sure I`ve `got it`.. maybe that`s just me being thick! heh. The intelligence of the author is apparant- as is his talent. Well done |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Loved every single thought wave, each one seemed to break, then pick up momentum and roll into the next. ~very cool reading! |
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