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Open Poetry #46

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tommy738
Junior Member

since 2009-10-28

Posts 33

0 posted 2010-01-16 02:03 PM

I love you so much
I wish you could see it
It hurts me so bad
to know you cant feel it
I know your in a dark place
and you feel all alone
I wish I could help
If only you knew your not alone
I know this is your battle
for you to fight on your own
they are your demons
all I can do is stand here
stand here and hope
and let you know
I'm here when your ready
to pull your from the dark
to show you the love
the love I have inside
the love that can make us whole

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

1 posted 2010-01-16 08:50 PM

Yo Tommy738,

This has a nice thought.

Try "can't".

Bobby

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