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All Hat, No Cattle.
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All Hat, No Cattle. |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. 
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there was a country music club about halfway between our places I put on my cheap cowboy hat bought a two dollar beer for each of us and danced with you there. I think you're wonderful, I told you just like I did when I saw you to your door that first velvet summer night together when you blew wonderful back to me with goodbye words that dripped silver all over my skin and we were both oil that night creating a new viscous solution that lubricated our aching heart joints better than anything we'd tried before. Fall in love early, fall in love often. |
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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
Very nice - leaves one wanting more. |
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whisperingwalt Member
since 2010-04-29
Posts 240Coquitlam, BC, Canada |
"and we were both oil that night creating a new viscous solution that lubricated our aching heart joints better than anything we'd tried before." Nice ending...it does leave one wanting more..good imagery..nice read.ww |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Is the wanting good or bad? Thank you both! Fall in love early, fall in love often. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
kewl stuff VM...like the bacon grease smell on a winter morning just before it turns to gravy.. |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
exactly like that, ds. thanks dude. Fall in love early, fall in love often. |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I love bacon grease gravy! A |
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