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Please redone for 2010 |
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Dadygoose Member
since 2010-01-01
Posts 162A Communist country |
Enchantment The bewitched, enchanted eyes and fingers through which we see and feel each other and all living things, the Sun, Moon, stars and everything beyond, are metaphorically seated in the heart. When you let me feel through your filmy, satin curves, I see everything that you can show me, both the visible and the invisible, and with an ethereal, shimmering radiance, as you do. Please, whisper me, in wordless sighs and moans, in all the colors, shades and tents there are. Please, whisper to me, as only you can do ... The world we arbitrarily call "real," is really just made of fantasies and dreams. So come to me tonight. Be hasty in your flight! Fill my waiting arms, love, and hold me ever, ever so tightly against you Please, materialize for me tonight? ... Please? ... Please? ... Please? ... ... And now, with ALL my heart, good night! |
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GBride Senior Member
since 2009-07-02
Posts 538 |
Very romantic! Yes, we all live in our own dreams. you have discovered the truth: objectivity doesn't exist outside of our own perceptions. We all live in our own bubble. All that we experience is viewed though our own preconceptions. After being married forty one years, I find I know my wife less than I did when I met her. You have a stirring poem here. |
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