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miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

0 posted 2010-05-21 01:52 AM

“To the Intelligence,” I hear in distant weave,
A place to go, for thoughts to thread,
A far away reprieve.

A place away from worry
Where fingers naturally tread
Upon the keys of ivory
Or upon a pencil’s lead.

To a place of wavy hair
To hills near pleasant streams
To those of warmth and those who care
To those within our dreams.

To the Intelligence, a place of make believe,
Where colors twist in neon gleams
To the growing bumbled breeze.

Not far from here, we’ll reach the place
Where anger dries to dust,
From its niche we'll see new light
From darkened forests’ trees.

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

1 posted 2010-05-21 03:40 AM

Enjoyed, Miscellanea
Ida

miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

2 posted 2010-05-21 08:28 AM

Thanks, Ida. It's good hearing from you again.

I don't know what I'd do without the a few of the multi-I's, Intelligences, or rather interest areas. Thank goodness for the arts. What stress relievers they are!

Again, thanks.

~misce

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2010-05-21 11:13 AM

quote:
To a place of wavy hair
To hills near pleasant streams
To those of warmth and those who care
To those within our dreams.

Dear Miscè, you have created a delightful poem, I just adore it! ... and can relate of course.

It's a true pleasure to find your inspired work here again!

Love and hugs.
Margherita

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

4 posted 2010-05-21 02:19 PM

What a grand poem you've penned.

I thoroughly enjoyed your thoughts and the beauty surrounding them.

ken206573
Member

since 2008-10-14

Posts 487

5 posted 2010-05-21 02:34 PM

I"m very delighted hearing your poem. I really enjoyed this one.

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

6 posted 2010-05-21 02:52 PM

What a treat it is to peek in and see your name... what a treat it is to click and read your work. *S* I really enjoyed this!!

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

7 posted 2010-05-21 05:42 PM

A place away from worry
Where fingers naturally tread
Upon the keys of ivory
Or upon a pencil’s lead.

Ahhh....what would I have done without some of those places you mentioned, my friend. Good to read you!

Bastet
Member

since 2010-05-07

Posts 246

8 posted 2010-05-22 01:57 AM

Yes, I often imagine a sanctuary where music and art take precedance over anger. I'm not always crazy about rhymed poetry. But you rhymes are clever and enhance the poem. I look forward to reading more of your poems.

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

9 posted 2010-05-22 04:23 AM

hello Miscelleanea, I love the images of the poem, intelligence make us better, we need intellignece, real good one, we need to share intelligence and sentiments, all mixed for the best, thanks for the very poetic and thoughful work.

regards

yann

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

10 posted 2010-05-23 02:46 AM

I am such of fan of your poetry and I love this one. Love it lots, I do.

A

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

11 posted 2010-05-23 10:36 AM

me likes

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

12 posted 2010-05-23 04:53 PM

I remember our conversations.

I smile at "Intelligence"

as I truly believe I know who might
be talking to your hear, at the moment.

Of course, I could be wrong.

But I'm not, right?

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