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Open Poetry #46
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whisperingwalt
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since 2010-04-29
Posts 240
Coquitlam, BC, Canada
0 posted 2010-05-12 11:51 AM


Unburdened to Fly

Friends without a faces
Shoes without laces

Words that inspires us
Words that captivate us

And take us to places

Where hearts are in healing
And dreamers are dreaming

While others are watching

The letting go of their story
No longer feeling sorry

The caterpillar transforms...

...into the butterfly ..

...that is free to be
© Copyright 2010 Walter Aguilar - All Rights Reserved
Eusta B. Mae
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since 2010-05-03
Posts 903
1 posted 2010-05-12 12:31 PM

YES! YES! YES! Couldn't have said it better myself! Lovin' it ebm
whisperingwalt
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since 2010-04-29
Posts 240
Coquitlam, BC, Canada
2 posted 2010-05-12 12:35 PM

EBM,
   Your zeal is contagious...thanks for the feedback.WW
Bastet
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since 2010-05-07
Posts 246
3 posted 2010-05-13 02:13 AM


A happy poem that really takes off and takes the reader with it. Great fun!
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