Open Poetry #46 |
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N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet Member
since 2009-07-30
Posts 360New Orleans |
A blind eye to the world My pen just bleeds my soul The blank canvass So it may sit there ignored I scream to the heavens Please don't let me become ignored A memory at the best Words lost in the wind Never to be told Never again I just stare in vain My mind raging Unable to be tamed I shall go on a quest Searching for my heart Find it in a mountain Damp and the darkest part There it shall lay maimed Dead and untouched No warmth to cradle the flame No one to see the struggle Much like the man straining to stay sane "Everything has its beauty but not everyone sees it." |
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Alison![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Zach, You are not ignored. Your poetry is too strong and good - and you are too interesting. A |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
Zach, you have not been forgotten. If anything I think a lot of the poets on this site probably have similiar feelings to you. Poetry isn`t a popularity contest. Even if you touch only one person isn`t it enough? |
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N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet Member
since 2009-07-30
Posts 360New Orleans |
Thank you for your responses. This was actually inspired by few events that I just wrapped together. |
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