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Open Poetry #46

Heaven and Earth

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

0 posted 2010-04-28 07:55 PM

Heaven and Earth

You could find my soul
In a paper mache shop.

Pieces glued together
Half hazard and chaotic

Like a kid made it

And somewhere beneath
the finger paint and stains
Is the child left
Kicking and Screaming again

-Juju

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

[This message has been edited by Juju (04-28-2010 09:43 PM).]

Zeigeist
Member

since 2009-12-09

Posts 311
Michigan

1 posted 2010-04-28 08:04 PM

Wonderful write. Let that kid out ya hear?

Zeitgeist

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

2 posted 2010-04-28 08:15 PM

Yo dear Juju,

This poem works good for me.

Love Bobby

Namyh
Senior Member

since 2009-01-20

Posts 988

3 posted 2010-04-29 12:21 PM

JuJu - We're all glued together from different parts of our lives. But over it, through it and under it is our indomitable need to kick and scream like we did at birth and like we'll probably do before death. But it's the in-between that is Life that moves our Heaven and Earth. Love your thoughts here JuJu. Namyh

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

4 posted 2010-04-29 08:37 AM

Absolutely loved it...though somehow didn't quiet "finish" for me....but haven't finished my first cup of coffee yet, either...

Wonderful write...

j.

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

5 posted 2010-04-29 11:22 AM

Excellent write, Juju.
Ida

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