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Open Poetry #46
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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
0 posted 2010-05-11 09:29 PM


Our World


I would let you
kiss my lips,
pull me close
with your
soft fingertips,
finger by finger,
inch by inch.

Our World
would shine,
tasting delicious
and feeling fine,
if I was yours
and you were mine.


JamesLee
11May
2010
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Bastet
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since 2010-05-07
Posts 246
1 posted 2010-05-12 02:08 AM

Clever little poem with good rhythm. Fun to read!
whisperingwalt
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since 2010-04-29
Posts 240
Coquitlam, BC, Canada
2 posted 2010-05-12 02:12 AM

Very romantic...creative...good job.WW
Eusta B. Mae
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since 2010-05-03
Posts 903
3 posted 2010-05-12 09:00 AM

Wistfully romantic, my favorite! very nice indeed! ebm
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