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Open Poetry #46

at the mythpoint

brian sites
Senior Member

since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
usa

0 posted 2010-05-10 04:37 AM

my plexus
        shivered
and i new
       it was   you
the one
     i mist
                  a Gulf
       so wide
never
to
be
   soiled
complete
                    a
                     quake
         to crack
asunder

the bellybutton
      of thunder
        the rasp
of thoughts on
            bone
the railings

            come undone

on this

          our stair

            Way

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2010-05-10 02:04 PM

It's so much fun reading you again!

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

2 posted 2010-05-13 12:32 PM

Yea, you're poems are so diverse and unexpected.
For me, it's the anticipation that makes them so exciting to read.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2010-05-13 12:40 PM

my plexus
        shivered
and i new
       it was   you
the one
     i mist

I agree with the other two comments...what a joy to read you

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

4 posted 2010-05-16 09:34 PM

yornk

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