Open Poetry #46 |
A Love Like No Other |
whisperingwalt Member
since 2010-04-29
Posts 240Coquitlam, BC, Canada |
A Love Like No Other What is a Mother? This is a question to ponder On this day like no other I sit and I wonder A mother is a refuge When the storms hit And problems feel huge Her lighthouse is always lit A mother puts herself last For she watches them all She always eats last So they can stand tall A mother cries often Her heart easily seen As her eyes seem to soften When she looks at her teen A mother never gives up She loves to the end So let’s raise our cup To her love without end |
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OldBuddyOldPal Member
since 2008-12-15
Posts 87 |
Amen!!! |
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Bastet Member
since 2010-05-07
Posts 246 |
A really touching poem and a pleasure to read. Thank you. |
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whisperingwalt Member
since 2010-04-29
Posts 240Coquitlam, BC, Canada |
Bastet, You are welcome. Glad you enjoyed it. |
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Robbie New Member
since 2007-04-08
Posts 8 |
Wish I'd have found this earlier. I would have asked you if I could read it to my mom! Great to read. |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
A mother never gives up She loves to the end So let’s raise our cup To her love without end Walt my good friend, take a bow for that heart touching, very poignant poem. It was a joy to read. I'll bet your Mum is very proud of you. very well done. Take care. Lindsay |
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Lamar Cole Member
since 2009-05-01
Posts 274 |
Mothers are wonderful. |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Mommas... deyz a good thang. Fall in love early, fall in love often. |
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srizah Junior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 34India |
Simple easy words strung together powerfully to give the essence of a universal concept. Kudos!! Live Life! |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
So true and a well written tribute, thank you.. Goldenrose. Friendship is Love without his wings. Lord Byron. |
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whisperingwalt Member
since 2010-04-29
Posts 240Coquitlam, BC, Canada |
Hey guys, Thank you all the for your kind remarks...without the love from our Moms who would we be? They deserve all the credit. ww |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
Mother`s day may be over but this poem is a reminder that we should be considerate of our mothers on every day. A good piece of work. |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Absolutely! "We'll chase them like rats across the tundra." |
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threadbear Senior Member
since 2008-07-10
Posts 817Indy |
Walt, in all your kindness, you are able to see into the loving motivations of the single most important woman in each of our lives. Jeff |
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