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Open Poetry #46
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Lamar Cole
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since 2009-05-01
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0 posted 2010-05-07 08:56 AM

There's a girl who walks the scenic trail.
The one with the long ponytail.
The way it blows in the breeze.
Can bring a fellow to his knees.

She's pure as sunshine.
Mellow as aged wine.
Mystical as a Hawaiian sunrise.
A beauty bouquet for the eyes.
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whisperingwalt
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since 2010-04-29
Posts 240
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1 posted 2010-05-07 10:41 AM

Lamar,
     She sounds like an amazing lady...nice rhymes...short but sweet.
ken206573
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since 2008-10-14
Posts 487
2 posted 2010-05-07 10:59 AM

I agree she seems like a beautiful bouquet. I simply enjoyed this very sweet poem.


LindsayP
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since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria
3 posted 2010-05-07 09:57 PM


A very cute poem Lamar

And a delight to read.

Lindsay
Bastet
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since 2010-05-07
Posts 246
4 posted 2010-05-08 05:19 AM

Mellow as aged wine but also sweet, light and bubbly as champagne. Delightful poem!
2islander2
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by the sea
5 posted 2010-05-08 09:56 AM

a very enjoyable read.
thanks for sharing.

yann
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