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Eusta B. Mae
Senior Member

since 2010-05-03

Posts 903

0 posted 2010-05-05 11:37 AM

He is holding me
But I’m wanting you
His arms are open
And his love is true
But my soul longs
For the truth of you
Your words are
Temptations
But your arms
Hold no invitation
I don’t know
What to do
His love is true
But my soul longs
For the truth of you

Chalmette Guy
Senior Member

since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

1 posted 2010-05-05 04:57 PM

You have a musical quality to your words EBM.
I really enjoy everything I have read by you.
I keep looking out for your work.
Well done.

Eusta B. Mae
Senior Member

since 2010-05-03

Posts 903

2 posted 2010-05-06 08:16 AM

thanks CG! I appreciate the encouragement-ebm

threadbear
Senior Member

since 2008-07-10

Posts 817
Indy

3 posted 2010-05-07 01:21 PM

The touch of nektar is within your words.
The taste of a long ago kiss is not something that is easily forgotten.
Jeff

whisperingwalt
Member

since 2010-04-29

Posts 240
Coquitlam, BC, Canada

4 posted 2010-05-07 01:26 PM

Oh the emotion of longing...well captured by you..well done.

Eusta B. Mae
Senior Member

since 2010-05-03

Posts 903

5 posted 2010-05-07 01:34 PM

Jeff and Wisperingwalt, thanks for checking out my work, I'm glad you like ebm

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

6 posted 2010-05-07 01:49 PM

Yo dear Eusta,

This would be more readable if you didn't start each line with a capital.

I'd also add some punctuation.

love Bobby

Eusta B. Mae
Senior Member

since 2010-05-03

Posts 903

7 posted 2010-05-07 01:54 PM

Bobby darlin' for someone that hated school you sure are picky about punctuation! LOL

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

8 posted 2010-05-08 12:30 PM

why is it we always want what we can't have...humans are so complex, are we not?

Nice write.

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

9 posted 2010-05-08 11:35 PM

Call it as you will, [and you called some on it, good job!]

What is, is. Choices, Voices, Adulation.
We all choose our choices....

and that's the truth of anyone who reads
the truth of you.

Well done, Lady.

Eusta B. Mae
Senior Member

since 2010-05-03

Posts 903

10 posted 2010-05-10 11:42 AM

Sunshine,you wonderful woman! thanks for your warm and sunny words here

ebm

WTBAKELAR

Senior Member

since 2008-09-09

Posts 1089
Utah, USA

11 posted 2010-05-12 10:16 PM

Been there, done that'

SUCKS.

Tracey

Eusta B. Mae
Senior Member

since 2010-05-03

Posts 903

12 posted 2010-05-13 09:09 AM

Tracey- sorry you can relate. ebm

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

13 posted 2010-05-17 06:41 PM

Nice...James

Eusta B. Mae
Senior Member

since 2010-05-03

Posts 903

14 posted 2010-05-19 02:54 PM

JM- glad you like. ebm

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