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Open Poetry #46

Better Days

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2010-04-30 09:51 PM

Better Days

"Like a bullrider
that doesn't want
to ride the best
bulls anymore."

You can tell that
a romance is over
when you want kisses
to linger and she
hastens to pull away.
That's a relationship
that has seen
better days.

JamesLee
30April
2010

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2010-05-05 08:57 AM

I guess I see myself here in this

sad poem

OldBuddyOldPal
Member

since 2008-12-15

Posts 87

2 posted 2010-05-05 07:08 PM

so sorry, James

Namyh
Senior Member

since 2009-01-20

Posts 988

3 posted 2010-05-05 10:43 PM

James - That's a sign to indeed take notice of. Hopefully, it's just one bad day among a lot of other good days. Very nice writing that holds the reader. Enjoyed. Namyh

whisperingwalt
Member

since 2010-04-29

Posts 240
Coquitlam, BC, Canada

4 posted 2010-05-06 12:54 PM

James - Even though the romance has seen better days, it opens the door to a new opportunity to a more amazing and new romance. Very heartfelt poem. Aren't emotions a great inspiration to write?

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

5 posted 2010-05-07 03:38 AM

simple and true, nice share.

yann

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