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Open Poetry #46

Burr

SilhouetteMarquis
Junior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 32

0 posted 2010-01-02 05:50 PM

Welcome, stranger tangent
Would it be a wish
That bells and qualms cloture?
Protuberance focused, gusto hardened
Below where color goes
And far below where summer spent
Hours contemplating
Shelf space for the gold
Might the autumn be that brazen

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2010-01-02 06:00 PM

Indeed! Yes, autumn would be so brazen!
Excellent first post. Welcome to Passions.
Enjoyable style you have going on here.

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

2 posted 2010-01-02 06:32 PM

SilhouetteMarquis - a brazen autumn leading into a magical winter...

BC

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

3 posted 2010-01-10 04:48 AM

I love how you use words in this poem. They really make your poem - and it's a fine poem too.

Alison

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