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gunnels of eusta bea may
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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she was jaunty in her warming wallow eusta bea may as she moved her bosom there in the brown muddy furrow of ol lazy windy she would take the sticky dress girls down to the gin landing on afternoons when their nearly nothing on gathered glances and the black boys in their skirtless skins would move their mouths and their bodies to make the next to me sounds in mutual urgency eusta bea may would lean her slender wood then next to splinter skin docks to scratch her back on the manhands that fit her with gloving strum when her gunnels were high, eusta bea may moaned _______________ daark (scribblenote: bayou sloop, shallow water slippers...gypsy craving for her muddy love and hated the dry dock medicine) [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (04-22-2010 11:54 AM).] |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Only you could write about a bayou sloop like this. She becomes alive and even conscious of her role ... so attractive. Simply fantastic. Through your eyes the scenes animate and are experienced vividly by the reader. Love, Margherita  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar..thanks so much lady friend!! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
That's some jaunty, warming, wallow!! Love your infamous scribble notes too! Hugs, you~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks blue baby..have missed you |
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