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A Remnant
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A Remnant |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
Oh you, you who allude me somewhere out there stalking in the dark distant, but still watching over me or perhaps, it's just the last remnant of some fantasy of someone whom I thought used to love me or she whom I have not met my guiding star I must be wherever you are but in truth you must be where ever I am and then there's the thought that there is no one for me I just drift from place to place face to face on a mission for those who need me and I milk their love, their friendship for the time that I have moving on, moving on and yet now, now, I wait wait for the next gust of wind to fill my sail a gentle nudge to another open door built by a nail to where ever you are or are you there alone alone in the dark fearful or just keeping your distance your silence your mask and I I, haven't changed just as clueless something to do-less until the signs the messages bring begin again or truth comes out from my veiled lover my veiled friend |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
The poem lost focus in the beginning, but overall was a fun piece to read. I enjoyed reading it alot. -Juju |
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