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A Woman |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
"Silence! Silence!" and the room grew cold and quiet the mind cleared as did the gentle room in the rear she moved silent through the shadows barefoot and swift the only sound, that of her thighs and long satin sash turn on the lights and she's gone to guide her spirit that glides beyond a look in her eyes and you can see all that crying, trembling hysterically what to do what to do with a soul so lost and confused too dangerous to touch too tumultuous to clutch too afraid to be alone |
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Laverne Pacquire Member
since 2009-11-15
Posts 96 |
A little bit bland for me but some points are good. these lines are pretty : the only sound, that of her thighs and long satin sash turn on the lights and she's gone to guide her spirit that glides beyond these lines have feminine mystique. take care |
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