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Me, Myself and I
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Me, Myself and I |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Me, Myself & I At times I have bathed in layers of happiness and bliss other times I have felt so lonesome that I could cry during sessions of unhappiness. No one is responsible for the choices that I make nor the consequences I must take. No one that is except me, myself and I. JamesLee 15April 2010 |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Well said! I especially loved the first few lines and the impact of the last few lines! |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo James, That's the way it is for most people, some much more that others. It's the way the world works. Bobby |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
life is about choices James and takes courage to accept about the wrong choices one makes. "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Well done James. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
from "bathed in layers of happiness" to "so lonesome I could cry" to your last stanza, this was an exceptional write |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Been there, done that. Know that trio well. You said it right. Peace. "We'll chase them like rats across the tundra." |
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Lamar Cole Member
since 2009-05-01
Posts 274 |
Very well written. |
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