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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
 Hush Mother moon is rising, as the beam of crescent silver blankets the lands. All is quiet and in peaceful harmony, while I sit patiently in tranquil silence. Soaking in every last drop of the illuminating ray, I feel a sense of calmness, collectiveness, and being, as I remain in awe of the luna god. Lost are my words, my lips locked tight, for I have been wrapped in warm, endless light. Hush ~*~ ARTIC WIND [This message has been edited by Artic Wind (04-19-2010 10:30 PM).] |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Artic Wind, This is all about hard to see font. Bobby |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Very cool all around.  "We'll chase them like rats across the tundra." |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
very zen-like...and a uber-cool pic too...nice, very nice |
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Misty Lilacs Senior Member
since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060White Birch Forest |
This is awesome. I just loved it! ooxx Marti |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
it's beautiful and hush inspiring Artic Wind |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Makes me fell calm and collected. Very nice. Ida |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Just what I needed! very lovely !!!! ~ARH |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Bobby, There, it should be better to read now! I used black font, always good to go with a dark, midnight poem! Thanks for the concern,  ARCTIC WIND |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Andrew, Thanks!!! ARCTIC WIND |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
steavenr - Thanks for the wonderful comment, my intentions seemed to be very clear. I wanted to write something that was very zen and peaceful. ARCTIC WIND |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Misty Lilacs, why thank you for your kind words. I've missed this place dearly, glad I'm back.  ARCTIC WIND |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Lady, shh  Thanks for the love, love. ARCTIC WIND |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Marchmadness, excellent, that was my goal! I was hoping that after reading this poem that people would feel the same way. ARCTIC WIND |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
A Romantic Heart ~ Thank you dear poetess, I am glad you enjoyed the poem. ARCTIC WIND |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Artic Wind, That's better. It's a lovely idea for a poem, and it works well. Bobby |
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Lamar Cole Member
since 2009-05-01
Posts 274 |
Very Nice. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Michael, how nice to see you are back and with such a beautiful, serene poem. I feel wrapped in the "endless light" together with you too ... Love and hugs. Margherita  |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Beautiful imagery created in this poem, nice picture too. "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
breatheing...not exhaleing... |
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Trapped - Nothing Member
since 2010-04-25
Posts 52 |
The picture is beautiful. But I WANTED your poem to have the same effect. I had to keep on looking at your picture to feel something. Sometimes the words should say something for themselves without visual. Your poem lost me. I stayed lost. |
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