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Torn |
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Zeigeist Member
since 2009-12-09
Posts 311Michigan 
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Torn Given back my heart like damaged goods, worn and soiled at the party, then torn on the way home. Slept in and finally left on the floor. The price tag lies in the dust under the stove. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Quite a good portrait of the experience written here. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Maybe you could get a refund? |
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Zeigeist Member
since 2009-12-09
Posts 311Michigan |
Thank you Kathy, Z. |
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Zeigeist Member
since 2009-12-09
Posts 311Michigan |
Lol, you make me smile RH. thanks for the reply Z. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Poignant write....if only you knew how I relate! You expressed it so powerfully. |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Not a very happy memory to keep Zeigheist Banish it and hope for better luck next time Take care my friend. Lindsay |
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Zeigeist Member
since 2009-12-09
Posts 311Michigan |
thank you Honeybee for your kind words. Z. |
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Zeigeist Member
since 2009-12-09
Posts 311Michigan |
Thank you Lindsay for your reply and good advice, however if I banished all my bad memories, my poetry would dry up for sure lol. Z. |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
A well written poem with an ending that stings. |
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