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Open Poetry #47

summers in paris

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

0 posted 2011-02-23 12:05 PM

each summer i go to paris to write
and each trip i make you greet me
as though you haven't seen me in ages
then you tell me i get more beautiful
with each passing year
but i'm just getting older
and it's really men not women that
get better looking with age

i pose for you by day watching your brush
as it whisks over canvas
nights are spent in quaint restaurants
where we eat only the finest foods
chasing it down with the best of the wines

later in the night i try to write
but you won't let me
you're too busy teasing and tickling me
it's impossible to concentrate
you never cease tempting me into your bed
you tell me i will be famous
once your masterpiece is complete
then when i come to paris
everyone i pass by in the city will know me

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

martiniat8
Senior Member

since 2003-06-21

Posts 897
Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic

1 posted 2011-02-23 02:38 AM

a lovely write...

you make me think, consider,
going to Paris again

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

2 posted 2011-02-23 03:38 AM

a lovely write faithmairee, I wish you will be famous some day and have fun in Paris, I love the sweet relationship .

yann

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