Open Poetry #47 |
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your love |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA ![]() |
your love is like an ocean breeze so gently blowing across the sea your endearing love envelopes me while at the same time it sets me free in the morning when i awake i think of you with each breath i take love is such a wonderful thing your love has made me believe in fate your love has touched my soul down deep in a way i've never known before and when you hold me in your arms my heart escapes and embraces yours There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Just beautiful! Kat >^..^< |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Very romantic!! I'm throwing a kiss to ya! Eric in a relationship the me becomes we. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Damn Eric. Beat me to that thrown kiss. Nice work here, Faith. The desire of a distant love is both a comfort and a calming effect as you go about your days. ~ Life is sexually transmitted ~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Faith what a nice balance. this very loving and romantic poem as compared to the heartache of the other. I especially like the last line here. Lori |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
Kat-Thank you for stopping by and reading my poem. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Eric-Awwww....caught that kiss...thanks... JerryPat-Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Lori-Thank you for your wonderful comments. There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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