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reality bites |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA 
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no one knows the pain i hide down-hearted dumbfounded numb to life no, nothing seems right i'm losing my grip i can't see the light reality bites There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Bite it does and bite again it will. But not for always and forever, it just feels that way. Hang in there.  Lori |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This hurts. This helps...  |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
Lori-Thank you, my friend. I appreciate your kind words Sunshine-thanks, it does help There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Start biting it back, Faith. ~~ All those who believe in telekinesis, raise my hand ~~ |
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Nareena Member
since 2011-02-17
Posts 51BC, Canada |
This could have described me a few years ago. I'm still not fully healed. Bite back |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
JerryPat-Bite I will! Nareena-Welcome to PIP. Thanks for reading and commenting on my poem. There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Love your title Faith. It's true, very few people get that up close and personal to feel our heartache. Good stuff~ |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
BluesSerenade-Thank you for your wonderful remarks. I appreciate them so much. There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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