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Legacy
Member

since 2011-01-08

Posts 60
Louisiana

0 posted 2011-01-08 09:04 PM

Dusk is shadowy
If you dwell in the country
Hazy is the night

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2011-01-08 09:15 PM

Nice work, like it a lot.

Welcome here, Legacy~

Legacy
Member

since 2011-01-08

Posts 60
Louisiana

2 posted 2011-01-08 09:19 PM

Thank you, BluesSerenade, for your comment and welcome.

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

3 posted 2011-01-08 10:17 PM

Great haiku, Welcome to PIP. Enjoyed.

-Trina.

When you decide to walk away- walk away. Don't look back, In that moment you'll lose trust and faith- in yourself.

Legacy
Member

since 2011-01-08

Posts 60
Louisiana

4 posted 2011-01-08 10:24 PM

Thank you Trina.

XGarapanX
Senior Member

since 2008-06-19

Posts 1435
Antarctica

5 posted 2011-01-08 10:53 PM

Great Haiku!

·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

Legacy
Member

since 2011-01-08

Posts 60
Louisiana

6 posted 2011-01-08 10:57 PM

Much appreciated, XGarapanX.

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

7 posted 2011-01-09 01:03 AM

welcome to PIP...i enjoyed your poem alot!

faith

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

Rex Allen McCoy
Member Elite

since 2000-01-30

Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London

8 posted 2011-01-09 01:58 AM

I've always enjoyed a good Haiku

welcome

Bastet
Member

since 2010-05-07

Posts 246

9 posted 2011-01-09 04:02 AM

Wonderful, carefully sketched haiku picture. Very visual. Well done.

Legacy
Member

since 2011-01-08

Posts 60
Louisiana

10 posted 2011-01-09 05:47 AM

Thank you Faith, PiP seems like a loving place.

Rex, I appreciate it.

Your words warm my hear this early morning, Bastet. Thank you.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

11 posted 2011-01-09 10:13 AM

Dawn reveals contours
the night's blanket is withdrawn
sun permeates home

Welcome again! Your haiku is very lovely and you inspired me to reply with a haiku, as we do here at Pip when we are so inclined.

Margherita

Legacy
Member

since 2011-01-08

Posts 60
Louisiana

12 posted 2011-01-09 11:10 AM

Thank you, Margherita, you brightened up the old home place.

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